Saturday, April 15, 2017

Lying Jane Hirshfield

Lying Jane Hirshfield


 
(Poem #1833) Lying
 He puts his brush to the canvas,
 with one quick stroke
 unfolds a bird from the sky.
 Steps back, considers.
 Takes pity.
 Unfolds another.
-- Jane Hirshfield
 (November 1994)

Hirshfield's another new-to-me poet - I stumbled across this little gem
while randomly surfing poetry sites and was instantly captivated. There is a
wonderful balance between the static and the dynamic - the explicit
description of painting leads me almost subconsciously to visualise the poem
itself as a painting, beautiful and self-contained, and then a metaphorical
step backwards reveals a temporal, almost balletic aspect that paradoxically
enhances rather than shattering the impression of containedness.

I was reminded strongly of Basho's famous haiku

 old pond.....
 a frog leaps in
 water's sound

(Poem #23, and see also Poem #1455 and
http://www.bopsecrets.org/gateway/passages/basho-frog.htm) - there is the
same impression of a sequence of events captured within a bounded whole,
though Hirshfield's penultimate "Takes pity" adds a human element that takes
it beyond the isolated beauty of the haiku.

martin

[Links]

Biography: American Poet, 1953-
 http://www.poets.org/poet.php/prmPID/563
 [broken link] http://www.sunyulster.edu/people/Hirshfield.asp

Interesting articles:
 [broken link] http://www.poems.com/hirinter.htm
 http://www.salon.com/weekly/hirshfield.html

Available link for download